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Writer’s Checklist for Evaluation Essay
1. Have I included a clear description of the subject I am evaluating? Yes
2. Does my thesis clearly state my opinion of the subject I am evaluating? Yes
3. Have I used effective criteria to evaluate my subject? Yes
4. Have I made a clear and fair judgment about each evaluative criterion? Yes
5. Have I supported each judgment with specific details and examples? Yes
6. Have I ended with an effective conclusion? Yes
7. Have I proofread thoroughly? Yes
The IPhone 5 is a waste of money but it is so popular, so why does everyone want to have it. I believe that this phone is not as good as everyone has been hyping it up to be. The IPhone 5 sold over 5 million phones three days after its release. In addition, the (IPhone 5 is available right now in the U.S. and 30 other countries and more than 100 countries by the end of the year) Apple reported. The IPhone 5 comes in 3 different models 16GB, 32GB, 64GB and also is available in white, black, or silver. Apple stock reached its sixth highest record in the last seven days from the release date. If you can’t afford the new IPhone or don’t want it right now the IPhone 4 is available for free with 2 year contracts at multiple providers. I am one of those people that don’t need to have the newest hottest items. Plus I don’t like an apple product the only thing that I own from apple is an IPod and that’s it. I owned an IPhone and I wasn’t that impressed there were something’s I liked but not many for me to spend that much money on it. The features of the IPhone 5 are very similar to the IPhone 4. The new feature is the new map system on the phone, which has a lot of bugs, says reviews. They made the battery life a little bit better but not much and the quality of the photos and videos are better too. The speed of the phone is 3 times faster than the IPhone 4. The IPhone...
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SEITZ, P. (2012, Sep 24). “Apple faithful turn out for iPhone 5 retail launch longer lines than last year apple shares hit record high on excitement over sixth-generation phone”. Investor 's Business Daily 24 Sept. 2012: A04. Print
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